After I have written my literacy narrative and turned it in,
if I were to make any changes to the paper I feel like I should have written it
with more description. I went through all the events in my life of learning how
to read and write but didn't give enough descriptions. I believe that I should
have given more descriptions to make a more involving and descriptive paper. I
should have also added more imagery to my paper. It was very straight forward
and didn't include vivid details of my experiences.
In regarding to my writing process, although I wrote a
outlive I believe I first should have made a more detailed outlive detailing
the experiences and exactly which order I wanted to say everything. I also
believe that I write better when I do my paper hand written first. I give each
word more thought when I write it and also I get distracted when I type and
there is a red squiggly line under my words. I always feel the need to correct
them and then I loose my train of thought. Then I should type up my paper improving
the wording even more. I think if I use this method that my paper will turn out
even better. Then finally get someone to finally review my paper to make some
minor adjustments.
Finally, my paper was written in different days, and I think
I should have took all my ideas in one go a put them on a paper. Usually, my
ideas change from day to day and I start forgetting how my thought process
went. So I thing the beginning move I should make in improving my writes
process in to fist improve in my outline making skills.
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